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are you waiting for his tongue to come,
and spread a plague below your waist?

you spread your legs, ready for his peg
hoping a baby would help your case.

too bad he was cleaner than the nuns at your convent,
if he had known who you were would he be so content?

to sharing a bed with a woman of "God"
if the beer goggles were off he'd see through your facade.

shame on you (sinner)
whore, you are the (winner)
congrats on your all expense paid trip to hell,
they say it's not too bad except for the smell
let me know when you get there,
a postcard would be nice.
but babe, when you're down there
their tongues are like knives.

such a holy laborer doing His deeds,
should never go hungry, but on you they all feed.

your milk is a bit lower for the men (between your legs),
their tongues are soo long, are they (eating your eggs)?

gyrating's not all, they'll find down there,
there's a few crabs that live between your hair.

but they get what they pay for, their dreams must come true,
for a dollar fifty they get an hour or two.

shame on you (sinner)
whore, you are the (winner)
congrats on your all expense paid trip to hell,
they say it's not too bad except for the smell
let me know when you get there,
a postcard would be nice.
but babe, when you're down there
their tongues are like knives.

there's nowhere to hide,
we caught your ass on tape.

you can go ahead and lie,
but your consent doesn't count as rape.

you fell below the bar,
on the way down you burned,

the tied your neck with the
umbilical chord.

shame on you (sinner)
whore, you are the (winner)
congrats on your all expense paid trip to hell,
they say it's not too bad except for the smell
let me know when you get there,
a postcard would be nice.
but babe, when you're down there
their tongues are like knives.

(oh!)

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You Wouldn't Believe What You Can Talk a Nun into Doing

the words in parenthesis are meant to be performed (screamed) by a different vocalist or in a different voice

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~xThePastIsPainfulx Aug 27, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
This is really well done! You can write lyrics better than half of the bands that are famous xD
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:iconmetaladdiction:
~MetalAddiction Aug 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
haha, thank you. lol. i'm working on it. :)
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:iconxthepastispainfulx:
~xThePastIsPainfulx Aug 28, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
lol, well so far its looking good :D
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:iconterisilver00:
nice. I think that the way you put it was in a way I had never thought of putting it.(I have never done nor had any expierancelike that but the thought was a lil differn't then what I would consider ^^')
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:iconx--fox:
I agree, this is incredibly written.
Love it.
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:icontiathemega-fan:
~TiaTheMega-Fan Aug 24, 2011  Student Writer
:thumbsup: Nice work.
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:iconmetaladdiction:
~MetalAddiction Aug 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you very much, may i ask what part you like most? or what part i could change?
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:icontiathemega-fan:
~TiaTheMega-Fan Aug 24, 2011  Student Writer
The part I like most is the first few stanzas. :meow:
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:iconmonstersalsa:
!MonsterSalsa Aug 24, 2011   Photographer
Nicely written!
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:iconmetaladdiction:
~MetalAddiction Aug 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :) apparently writing about whores is my specialty lol.
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